Monday, February 20, 2012

Monday Mornings

I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.Here are 3 versions . Which Monday Morning introduction.
Which do you like the best and why ?

1. I knew that me as a kid needs 9 to 10 hours of sleep. So I go to bed extremely early.Then Monday morning comes around, and I'm not tired at all.

2. 40 out of 52 Mondays I struggle to get up for school . I Imagine waking up for 52 Mondays every year , I would probably faint. Monday mornings just kill my beauty sleep.

3. Monday Mornings are so hard to get up because you feel so tired after your weekends, especially when you've just had your friends over. I have to get out of bed though, and get changed for school.


  1. It was number 2 that hooked me Jorja! I had never thought of Monday mornings quite like that.

    Well done

    Mrs Burt

  2. Hey Jorja I never knew you had beauty sleeps. I like paragraph 2 because it has humor, personal feelings and facts.

    Yours sincerely

  3. Hey Jorja, I really liked paragraph two. I liked it because it had some interesting facts AND it had a sense of humour.

    From Jonita


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